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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 19 Jul 2008 11:49 
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Whenever you copy the poems from anywhere, you should site the authers or the websites that are taken from.
Otherwise persons knowing the real source would look down on you,
because you try to make yourself good appearances but actually you don't use your brain anymore.


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 19 Jul 2008 12:19 
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P' Ked, you're totally right. ^_^ Take Angel's reply for example, he quoted the poem from lyrics of Closer and he noted that in the rep. You may say some songs are already well-known but that's another story :razz:

PS sorry if it sounds offensive to you guys na krub, but it's really really really from good intention krub pom. :20:


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 20 Jul 2008 13:42 
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Dear... Khun kedinvent and Khun PrincePP

Thanks for your acknowledgement nakrub.
I'm totally agree with your guys about
reference the original source of all texts.

But what if you guys pay some more attention
of this topic and take a good look. You'll see
the word Let's write and that doesnt mean let's
copy and paste love poem from somewhere else krub.

And what if you notice for more. You will see action and
reply between poem by poem krub. :shy:

I really hope you guy will come show some poem
of yours here beside your advice nakrub.
With no offense and with all my respect
and thanks anyway krub.

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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 20 Jul 2008 16:31 
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hehe, sorry if i hadn't read carefully enough to see what went on here. :1:

Kamui wrote:
I really hope you guy will come show some poem
of yours here beside your advice nakrub.
With no offense and with all my respect
and thanks anyway krub.

:smile1:


i'd love to share some thoughts of my romantic side :25: but... ummm, let's just say i'm not such a good composer :razz: and moreover, don't wanna be an interruption while you and P' Dream Master are flirting cutely throughout the forum. :11:


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I am not anyone's wildest dream,
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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 21 Jul 2008 12:53 
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Your dark brown hair feels soft when touched.
Your hazel eyes just filled with lust.
Your gorgeous smile makes me all blushed.
Your mystic voice calms all the fuzz.

Your charms got me under your spell.
Got a secret I wanna tell.
"Jacob, I have a crush on you"
I really wanna be your boo... :shy:


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 21 Jul 2008 18:58 
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PrincePP wrote:
i'd love to share some thoughts of my romantic side :25: but... ummm, let's just say i'm not such a good composer :razz: and moreover, don't wanna be an interruption while you and P' Dream Master are flirting cutely throughout the forum. :11:


Ohh Come onnnnnnnnnnn.... Who's flirting.
It's not true krub. :1: Let's come here
and bring it on nakrub Nong PrincePP.
I'm looking forward to see Nong PrincePP's poem
also with khun Kedinvent as well nakrub. :34:




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Your dark brown hair feels soft when touched.
Your hazel eyes just filled with lust.
Your gorgeous smile makes me all blushed.
Your mystic voice calms all the fuzz.

Your charms got me under your spell.
Got a secret I wanna tell.
"Jacob, I have a crush on you"
I really wanna be your boo... :shy:


Really wanna be his boo.... :24:

Ohhhhh....How sweet??? :34:


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 22 Jul 2008 19:58 
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Kamui wrote:

I'm looking forward to see Nong PrincePP's poem
also with khun Kedinvent as well nakrub. :34:


Haha, I second that motion na krub :D


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 30 Jul 2008 21:50 
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Love bring a smile
Love bring a cry

Love made a fear
Love made a tear

Love come and torn
Love come and gone


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 07 Sep 2008 01:47 
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Little did you know feelings stay the same
Old time that passed, I have myself to blame
Visions of us are engraved in the mind
Even how long, it's "love" that never dies

I didn't write this to someone in particular ...I think :roll:

It's nothing as a special occasion, really. I just wanted to see how my self-composed poem would turn out to be. What do you think about it? :20:


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
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No more love poems??


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 26 Oct 2008 03:06 
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Angel wrote:
No more love poems??


Well, I haven't seen the author visiting his topic for quite a long time now. Have you had any contact with him lately?

I'm not really inspired myself. Why don't you give it a try? ^_^


I am no prince,
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I am not anyone's wildest dream,
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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 07 Dec 2008 23:42 
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Pretending to be where I'm not anymore.

Nevertheless....I'm still here baby..

Miss me?...Huh??

Love Poem gonna be written again..sooner or later





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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 07 Dec 2008 23:44 
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PrincePP wrote:
Little did you know feelings stay the same
Old time that passed, I have myself to blame
Visions of us are engraved in the mind
Even how long, it's "love" that never dies

I didn't write this to someone in particular ...I think :roll:

It's nothing as a special occasion, really. I just wanted to see how my self-composed poem would turn out to be. What do you think about it? :20:


By the way... I really like it baby.
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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 10 Dec 2008 11:40 
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I do miss you, P' Kamui (though you didn't recall who I was on MSN :ummm: ), but please don't refer to me as 'baby', we haven't even met na krub :hii:


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 15 Dec 2008 22:19 
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Hahaha... :17:
I did recall you..Just kidding you.. that's all..
Hope everything going well and so fine for u nakrub!


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 15 Dec 2008 23:36 
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Kamui wrote:
Hahaha... :17:
I did recall you..Just kidding you.. that's all..
Hope everything going well and so fine for u nakrub!


I see, so it was a joke. Sorry for misunderstanding na krub :ummm:

Hope everything's great with you too krub pom ^_^


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 03 Feb 2009 20:08 
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Wish upon a falling star
But don't lose sight of who you are
Priceless love is never far
You can walk, don't need a car

Catch some love and keep it safe
Keep a smile on your face
Be sure your dreams to always chase
And let love be your saving grace

When you're cold look for a friend
They'll be with you 'til the end
Your heart they can always mend
And forever they defend

Don't look too far to find love
It doesn't come from clouds above
Softly like the purest dove
Love into your life will shove

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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 02 Mar 2009 02:41 
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I'm not good with love and poem,
Creating something already gone,
It's hard to do to bring it born,
If you like so let it go on,

Love Life Leave put me too deep,
They do a dream on me like creep,
I'm not able to get out of sleep,
They greet with eat my blood like sweet,

Love used to be the great of me,
Life is happy like fish dreaming for sea,
Leaving like keeping fish from free,
Fish is me waiting for the death to be,

To soar the great wonderful of love,
More and more I have to get the nerve,
Use my little head to search the words,
Love and love and love and HURT,

Flying,
Flying and flying,
Flying from love like bird,
On earth flying flying flying,

Flying away...


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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
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Is it a must
to love and lust?

Is there any space
where we don't have to afraid
of hurt caused by love?

I walk through the rain
through the forest, across the mountain
to find the :heart: chain...
now I begin to realize that it might be in vain

It never appear when I come near
when I give up, it become clear
It's like a shadow, it's like a dream
vivid but seem a dishonest scheme

There is a song that said love became dust
Dust is dirty... dust is a waste
so why love is still a must?



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 Post subject: Re: Let's write ... "The Love Poem"
PostPosted: 08 May 2009 06:47 
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-not my poem
-go check out his videos. this guy's super awesome!



He was smug and a lethal drug
He was shrewd and could be quite rude
I wanted him bought for my cabinet
He would be the only trophy in it
He was never one to hug
he was a bandit, a thug

Better to be lucky than clever
Better to live forever
and choose when to die

Better to be lucky than clever
Better for us to be in love together
than choose to be wise

I guess I'm just not the genius you've been looking for
I guess I'm just not that androgynous anymore

Is'nt it strange how that person that makes you susceptible to tremble
Makes everything else in our past seem almost acceptable


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